English // Writing Composition
Responding to Writing Feedback
With teacher guidance, re-read own writing aloud to check it sounds right; listen and respond to questions and suggestions from teacher or peers to add detail, clarify meaning, and strengthen writing — this is the scaffolded beginning of writing self-evaluation, not an independent skill
Quick check
When the learner's teacher asks them to read their own writing aloud and then asks "does that bit make sense?", can the learner listen to the feedback and make a simple change to improve it?
Ask this to see whether the topic is secure.
Topic // Mastery
What mastery looks like
- Reread own writing and spot a missing word or unclear sentence
- Add a detail in response to a question (e.g. 'Can you tell me more about...?')
- Make at least one improvement to a piece based on feedback
Topic // Map
Where this fits
- RequiredMust come first
- HelpfulHelps, but not essential
Before this
4 topics- Checking Your Own WorkHelpful
Learning to Learn // Learning to Learn // Ages 5 to 6
Re-reading own writing to check it makes sense is the writing-domain form of the universal self-checking habit
Writing Composition // Ages 5 to 7
Need writing to revise
- Writing Process VocabularyHelpful
Writing Composition // Ages 5 to 8
Re-reading and responding to feedback is more effective when pupils know terms like 'revise', 'edit', and 'meaning'
- Feeling of not understandingHelpful
Learning to Learn // Learning to Learn // Ages 6 to 7
Noticing when your own writing doesn't make sense requires the universal comprehension-monitoring habit applied to one's own text
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Responding to Writing Feedback
Ages 5 to 7 // Thinking skill
Leads to
3 topics- Revising and editingRequired
Writing Composition // Ages 6 to 7
Proofreading builds on Y1 revising writing
- Revising and editing (age 8+)Required
Writing Composition // Ages 8 to 9
Independent writing self-evaluation (8-9) builds directly on the scaffolded version introduced with teacher support (5-7)
- Reviewing Own WritingHelpful
English Thinking // Ages 8 to 10
Independently judging whether writing achieves its intended effect grows out of the scaffolded habit of re-reading writing and responding to teacher and peer feedback
Topic // Standards
Curriculum standards
- Common Core State Standards for English Language Arts & Literacy in History/Social Studies, Science, and Technical Subjects
- W.1.5W.K.5
- The national curriculum in England: Key stages 1 and 2 framework document
- Eng/KS1/Y2/WC/3aEng_Y1_WC_04Eng_Y1_WC_05
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